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The Sun was shining in a cloudless blue sky with a breeze so light,
Ocean was her horizon, in which
The sun’s golden rays unfolded billions of dazzling diamonds

It was a hot summer day, but her lemon iced tea poured in a tall glass with three drowning ice cubes is what kept her cool
Along with those delicate kisses the ocean blew on her exposed skin
So refreshingly inviting

So she stood, lifting her body from her white painted wooden chair
Carefully stepping along the three descending stairs from her porch
Leaving behind her sky blue coated house with wooden shutters surrounding her open windows which caught the gentle wind
The drapes swirled back and forth full of life

Bare foot, she gracefully walked toward the beautiful blue before her
Feeling the soft sand underneath her soles
Her toes digging in the warm beige sediments

She was tall
Five feet and eight inches of pure unforgettable rare beauty
Her gorgeous naked body adorned with a long sapphire colored dress down to her ankles
So thin and loose this material was around her waist, hips, and her full breasts
Barely hanging by the skinny straps on her shoulders
It was deeply cut along her sternum
With a slit raising up her right thigh
The wind whirled between her legs, grazing her bare chest and areolas

She walked with a style of grace
With a certain confidence radiating from her lovely frame
It was the way her hips went from side to side, her shoulders set back and her chin raised
Her caramel skin was sun kissed to a coppery brown
The brightness of the afternoon reflected in her brown almond shaped eyes
Though they were squinted, the mesmeric sparkle of her soul was blinding

A natural beauty, she was
With short coarse thick hair
Tiny tight curls all around
She didn’t need make up to make you fall in love with her
Yet her captivating smile is what made your soul come alive
Her soft sensual strawberry lips pressed against your skin erupted esoteric emotions
Making you crave a million more

Imperfections were nonexistent
Flawless, she was
Feeling free. Feeling freedom.
Slowly walking along the shore
Loving the fresh aroma from the beautiful blue before her
The salty water crept up and gently resided
Only to spill between her toes and drown her feet beneath
She shivered holding up her dress with one hand from the coolness that traveled throughout her body
Goosebumps chilled her calves, thighs, and arms

Glancing down to find a smooth pale pink pebble the size of a nickel
She threw it into the absolutely amazing abyss before her
Enticed by this glamorous yet mysterious ocean
She graciously walked deeper and deeper into the blue mass
The cold penetrated her skin
Diving into those glistening gems
She bathed herself with its shimmering wetness

When she emerged, those dazzling diamonds drizzled down her gorgeous skin
Trickling from her sapphire dress that soaked her body through and through
Her lovely figure was outlined
From her rounded breast and erected nipples
Her waist that traveled inward
Followed by her wide hips and thick thighs

When she opened her eyes, walking onto the shore
She glanced up to see the enchanting blue skies
Her sight protected by a marshmallow cloud that enveloped that radiating clementine
But soon melted away

Returning to her home
She found the three drowning ice cubes dissolved, enclosed by a sweating glass
She took a sip of the diluted mixture and smiled
Her only thoughts were the melting marshmallows above
Her mind clear and blank
Yet filled with tranquility,
Calmed by the beautiful blue before her


Looking to her left
With…

Eyes full of love,
Love that submerged her retinas and optic nerves
And glazed her chocolate irises
Had created a mirror image deep within my pupils

We drowned inside each other’s gaze

Sent from heaven
She is my goddess…
©2009 ~Yuniku
:iconyuniku:

Author's Comments

This poem took me EXTREMELY long to finish. I went from bouts of writer's block to just plain frustration. I was inspired by my girlfriend. I was calming her down by helping her meditate ( I'm an unprofessional-aspiring yogi ^_^) and I asked her where she was in her mind and she told me this beautiful story. I was inspired and decided to write a short story originally but my skills restricted me and I reluctantly did a long poem.

Please please please comment and tell me what you guys think. What you liked and what you didnt like. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.

Thanks,
Luecretia

P.S. I changed the title from "Aphrodite" to "Bare Feet"... I grew old of that title and thought it to be too cliche. I have my reasons for "Bare Feet" and I feel it connects more with the poem... (in my head at least ^__^ )

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Yes indeed i did. :nod:

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thank you! ^_^

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You are very welcome.

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Wow...
I can tell this took a lot of time and hard work. It's excelent.
:clap:
Rly great job :D

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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


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thank you so much ^_________^

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You're welcome :hug:

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it was a bad day. the sun exploded;
the earth roiled and tore entire cities asunder;
the bus in front of my car crashed violently and everyone died;
i ran out of green tea.


~ ohsostarryeyed :sun:
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interesting imagery.
lovely words. (:


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